This from the darkness of the mind, that egg of thought, always hatching and smoothing, this time occasioned by... maybe the bouncing back at me of his reflection in the bathroom mirror, the current occupant stranger, electric toothbrush in there, whirring. Maybe.
Devin rereading 3 times and smiling to myself… I thought “if he’d space it like poetry people might not/ wouldn’t growl and give up.” (What I just wrote was haiku but”improperly” paced) … your thoughts fascinate your mother and any fan willing to either read more than once or on your wave length and happy to Surf or sift while riding brain waves. Meanwhile, keep enjoying the workings of your mind. I do too!
I think that formatting thing must be an aspect of viewing the post on your phone. It is lineated intentionally and looks it when viewed on the computer.
Devin rereading 3 times and smiling to myself… I thought “if he’d space it like poetry people might not/ wouldn’t growl and give up.” (What I just wrote was haiku but”improperly” paced) … your thoughts fascinate your mother and any fan willing to either read more than once or on your wave length and happy to Surf or sift while riding brain waves. Meanwhile, keep enjoying the workings of your mind. I do too!
I think that formatting thing must be an aspect of viewing the post on your phone. It is lineated intentionally and looks it when viewed on the computer.
Good to know. Never read On Computer … only use it for writing!